ella_menno: (cookies!Dean by sinister morgue)
ella_menno ([personal profile] ella_menno) wrote2007-11-03 07:46 pm

nano update; call for first line


5256 / 50000 words. 11% done!

THE ROAD SO FAR:

Totally Necessary Introduction and Summary

Chapter One

CHAPTER TWO:

So Dean and Sam and the Impala are right outside these crumbly old gates, and Dean is all "whatever, this sucks, lets find some girlz!!" and Sammy is all "NO DEAN MAYBE THEIR IS INTRESTING STUFF HERE" and the Impala is all "vrrrroooom!" and then they hear a NOISE and they look over past the crubbly old gates and they see ANOTHER CAR driving right TOWARDS THEM and it is TURKOYSE.

And so Dean is thinking 'OMG I could totally fix that up' and the Impala HEARS HIM becuz they share a PSYCHIC LINK, and she (pfft, the car is so totally a girl, like NE1 doesn't know that) gets all MAD and JELLUS, and Sammy is all "OH NOES DEAN WHAT HAVE YOU DONE NOW" and Dean is all "bwuh?" and the car STOMPS OFF on her TIRES TYRES and that other strange TURKOYZE car goes WITH HER and the last thing the Brothers see is BOTH CARS and they are headed towards a LARGE BODY.

Of WATER.



I'm not sure why Sam's dialogue is in all caps. I am, however, enjoying the heck out of making up these faux!nano summaries.

That is to say: still fake, guys. My actual NaNo is nothing like it at all. (Mercifully.)




And now for something completely different:

If anyone would like to leave me an opening line in the comments, I will use it to create a drabble. *smiles*

First line

[identity profile] dolimir-k.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
What self-respecting cat didn't like tuna?

Re: First line

[identity profile] ella-menno.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
“What self-respecting cat doesn't like tuna?”

The kitten glared at Sam and at the fishy-smelling gob of gunk next to him. With a sniff, it settled down and began licking its paws.

Fussy, Sam could deal with: rude, not so much. He plucked the kitten up off the dash and held it up so he could look right into its tiny, fuzzy face.

“Come on,” he said, his irritation barely under control. “The book is clear - you have to have a full stomach before I can reverse the curse. You don’t want to stay like this, do you, Dean?”


Obviously I have been reading too much crack!fic lately. *g*

Re: First line

[identity profile] dolimir-k.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
Obviously I have been reading too much crack!fic lately. *g*

Not at all. It was just perfect AND made me grin like a loon!

Re: First line

[identity profile] ella-menno.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. I like making you giggle. (And I'm oddly fond of kitten!Dean.)

Will we be hearing from Sarah again soon? *bounces*

Re: First line

[identity profile] dolimir-k.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
I'm fond of kitten!Dean too! Heh.

Yes. There will be more Sarah tonight, but it's starting to get HARD!

Re: First line

[identity profile] ella-menno.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Well, if there's anything I can do to help, just let me know.

Re: First line

[identity profile] dolimir-k.livejournal.com 2007-11-04 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
Just keep commenting...and if something doesn't feel right, tell me!!