*dangles snippet* Readers?
Oct. 31st, 2007 11:29 amOkay. So. I have no idea where all my motivation for this Luke/Noah fic went; I have pages and pages (and pages!) of summaries and outlines and even several scenes written, but the show isn’t going the direction I thought it would, and evidently I’m allergic to AUs. Who knew?
The premise here is that Noah is living out at the farm with Luke and Holden and whoever the heck else lives out there. There have been issues with the physical part of their relationship – they’ve both been holding back, for a variety of reasons – but on the night before this scene, there was a little bit of action. It was good for Noah, and ended up good for Luke, too, who moved his leg for the first time. Unfortunately, most of the family walked in on them while they were still glowing, rumpled, and sweaty. (But clothed! Mostly.)
Noah’s been at work/school all day, and is just getting back to the farm. Oh! Also, Lily and Holden are working at patching up their own relationship.
( Untitled snippet of about 1800 words )
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Talk to me; what do you think? Is it worth working on? Too cracked? Do you need to see another scene to decide? *sigh* Yeah, hello, insecure. Welcome to my world.
The premise here is that Noah is living out at the farm with Luke and Holden and whoever the heck else lives out there. There have been issues with the physical part of their relationship – they’ve both been holding back, for a variety of reasons – but on the night before this scene, there was a little bit of action. It was good for Noah, and ended up good for Luke, too, who moved his leg for the first time. Unfortunately, most of the family walked in on them while they were still glowing, rumpled, and sweaty. (But clothed! Mostly.)
Noah’s been at work/school all day, and is just getting back to the farm. Oh! Also, Lily and Holden are working at patching up their own relationship.
( Untitled snippet of about 1800 words )
**--**
Talk to me; what do you think? Is it worth working on? Too cracked? Do you need to see another scene to decide? *sigh* Yeah, hello, insecure. Welcome to my world.